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Carl finds a dead body while exploring an abandoned house a few days after Halloween. Convinced he is being haunted by an evil spirit he brings his skeptical roommate along to check it out.
By The redneck out law
Good but not 5 star good
Waste of time.
The book does not mesmerize you in any way. The imagery of the scenery attempts to give an atmosphere that immerses you, however it falls flat.
The language is too simple for anyone seeking an above average read. This language is fine for children to read, but for someone in search of language that involves the reader into understanding hidden messages within the language should divert their attention to something else.
The story itself is not too interesting. You may attempt to tell it on a dark night as a scary story, but it will not live up to anything you friends think up.
The characters themselves are also not very interesting. Even for a short story there is no interest for anything that occurs to them. You are never sympathetic to their qualms.
This story, even as a short story, is not worth a read if you are searching for anything with grasping language, characters or plot.
By Christ is love
Really liked it. Wish it had been a longer story.
It's ok i mean I wished the author had added a little more its kinda short lived. It's a good 5 minute heart pounder. I liked it!
Left me hanging
Loved the story. But I need to know more. Please finish!!!!! You just left me hanging.
Great story. I wish the climax was more dramatic but great story.
By Boss Damien
Loved it! Keep writing more!
I just read your story and its great. The only thing i didn't like was how its too short Please make it a longer story, that would be great.